The Flaws Of Light
If there were words to say how I feel, Maybe then I'd tell you the truth.If only time stood still,Then perhaps we'd have this day.If I could tell you all I have to say,Then maybe my heart would stay...
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It hurts when you are away from the one you love. Very nice poem!! Poetry is for everyone!
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I loved it! It seems that I can relate to the poem just as well. Nice wording!Life is like a song!
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Very descriptive! I like the way you express your feelings. Excellent poem! Maureen
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Excellent word use here, G, You are a bit off with your metering, but that will come with experience. I like the way you play with questions and solutions. The line "Gazing into your shimmering eyes...
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This is a very insightful piece to be written by one so young... love can hurt and heal at the same time!! This is worth another read!! ~Poetry is an extention of ourselves~
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Now others seem to catch on, to the music of your hearts songs Never give up! Never give in! for the music it plays, can only win Let your heart beat faster and then, send your voice out on the wind...
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how true that love can hurt and heal at the same time ..... just beautifully expressed, shimmering rose, with lovely images!~JaML~"For long you live and high you fly, and smiles you'll give and tears...
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